[28222] trunk/doc/guide/new/xml/intro.xml

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Revision: 28222
          http://trac.macosforge.org/projects/macports/changeset/28222
Author:   markd at macports.org
Date:     2007-08-24 18:04:46 -0700 (Fri, 24 Aug 2007)

Log Message:
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Refine intro wording.

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/doc/guide/new/xml/intro.xml

Modified: trunk/doc/guide/new/xml/intro.xml
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--- trunk/doc/guide/new/xml/intro.xml	2007-08-25 00:58:29 UTC (rev 28221)
+++ trunk/doc/guide/new/xml/intro.xml	2007-08-25 01:04:46 UTC (rev 28222)
@@ -13,10 +13,9 @@
   it, so MacPorts may automatically fetch, patch, compile, and install ported
   software.</para>
 
-  <para>However, installing software using MacPorts instead of installing it
-  manually brings advantages apart from the convenience of automating the
-  software install process for individual applications. For example,
-  MacPorts:</para>
+  <para>However, installing software using MacPorts instead of doing it
+  manually brings advantages apart from scripted installs for individual
+  applications. For example, MacPorts:</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>

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