[26960] trunk/doc/guide/xml/newguide.xml

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Revision: 26960
          http://trac.macosforge.org/projects/macports/changeset/26960
Author:   markd at macports.org
Date:     2007-07-13 17:13:12 -0700 (Fri, 13 Jul 2007)

Log Message:
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Minor grammar fixes.

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/doc/guide/xml/newguide.xml

Modified: trunk/doc/guide/xml/newguide.xml
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--- trunk/doc/guide/xml/newguide.xml	2007-07-13 22:56:32 UTC (rev 26959)
+++ trunk/doc/guide/xml/newguide.xml	2007-07-14 00:13:12 UTC (rev 26960)
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
       </orderedlist>
 
       <note>
-        <para>Xcode Tools is not updated via OS X's Software Update
+        <para>Xcode Tools are not updated via OS X's Software Update
         utility.</para>
       </note>
     </section>
@@ -119,8 +119,8 @@
       </orderedlist>
 
       <note>
-        <para>To check or verify that X11 and the X11SDK are installed, you
-        may check for the presence of files <filename>X11User.pkg</filename>
+        <para>To see if X11 and the X11SDK are installed, check for
+        the presence of files <filename>X11User.pkg</filename>
         and <filename>X11SDK.pkg</filename> respectively in
         <filename>/Library/Receipts/</filename>.</para>
       </note>

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