[41275] trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-phase.xml

[markd at macports.org]

Revision: 41275
          http://trac.macports.org/changeset/41275
Author:   markd at macports.org
Date:     2008-10-29 11:32:56 -0700 (Wed, 29 Oct 2008)
Log Message:
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Minor wording and markup changes.

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-phase.xml

Modified: trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-phase.xml
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--- trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-phase.xml	2008-10-29 17:38:50 UTC (rev 41274)
+++ trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-phase.xml	2008-10-29 18:32:56 UTC (rev 41275)
@@ -644,9 +644,9 @@
       in this section. However, fetching via CVS may cause non-reproducible
       builds, so it is strongly discouraged.</para>
 
-      <para>You have to set <link
-      linkend="reference.phases.fetch.advanced.fetch-type"><varname>fetch.type</varname></link>
-      to <option>cvs</option> to fetch from CVS.</para>
+      <para>The <option>cvs</option> <link
+      linkend="reference.phases.fetch.advanced.fetch-type">fetch.type</link>
+      is used to fetch source code from a CVS repository.</para>
 
       <variablelist>
         <varlistentry>
@@ -760,9 +760,9 @@
       the keywords in this section. However, fetching via Subversion may cause
       non-reproducible builds, so it is strongly discouraged.</para>
 
-      <para>You have to set <link
-      linkend="reference.phases.fetch.advanced.fetch-type"><varname>fetch.type</varname></link>
-      to <option>svn</option> to fetch from svn.</para>
+      <para>The <option>svn</option> <link
+      linkend="reference.phases.fetch.advanced.fetch-type">fetch.type</link>
+      is used to fetch source code from an svn repository.</para>
 
       <variablelist>
         <varlistentry>
@@ -819,8 +819,9 @@
       this section. However, fetching via Git may cause non-reproducible
       builds, so it is strongly discouraged.</para>
 
-      <para>You have to set <varname>fetch.type</varname> to
-      <option>git</option> to fetch from git.</para>
+      <para>The <option>git</option> <link
+      linkend="reference.phases.fetch.advanced.fetch-type">fetch.type</link>
+      is used to fetch source code from a git repository.</para>
 
       <variablelist>
         <varlistentry>
@@ -879,9 +880,9 @@
       keywords in this section. However, fetching via Mercurial may cause
       non-reproducible builds, so it is strongly discouraged.</para>
 
-      <para>You have to set <link
-      linkend="reference.phases.fetch.advanced.fetch-type"><varname>fetch.type</varname></link>
-      to <option>hg</option> to fetch from Mercurial.</para>
+      <para>The <option>hg</option> <link
+      linkend="reference.phases.fetch.advanced.fetch-type">fetch.type</link>
+      is used to fetch fource code from a Mercurial repository.</para>
 
       <variablelist>
         <varlistentry>
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