[MacPorts] SummerOfCodeWelcomeMail modified

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 Hello $STUDENT, $STUDENT, $STUDENT
 
-you have been accepted into Google Summer of Code $YEAR and will work for
+You have been accepted into Google Summer of Code $YEAR and will work for
 MacPorts over the summer. Congratulations, we are happy to have you!
 
 First of all let me welcome you to our organization. I am looking
@@ -64,12 +64,11 @@
 
 Hello,
 
-for the Google Summer of Code program $YEAR our organization, The
-MacPorts Project, got three slots assigned. We filled them based on the
-quality of the proposals and on the limited mentor capacities we have.
+For Google Summer of Code $2015 our, MacPorts was assigned three slots.
+We filled them based on the quality of the proposals and on the limited mentor capacities we have.
 
 <REPLACE_WITH_SUMMARY>
-Unfortunately, we get less and less proposals each year, but at least
+Unfortunately, we get fewer proposals each year, but at least
 the overall quality remains constant. Much more activity has been
 triggered on macports-dev than the years before.
 </REPLACE_WITH_SUMMARY>
@@ -85,7 +84,7 @@
 $STUDENT, $STUDENT, $STUDENT, welcome to our community!
 
 Although you have already introduced yourself on the mailing list with
-your proposals, it would probably be a good idea if you three could
+your proposals, it would probably be a good idea if you could
 reply with a few words about your upcoming projects.
 
 Looking forward to a Summer of Code,
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