outage notice?

Arto Bendiken arto at bendiken.net
Tue Sep 1 15:03:31 PDT 2015

On Tue, Sep 1, 2015 at 11:55 PM, Clemens Lang <cal at macports.org> wrote:
> I agree. I added a notice to the start page in r139914.
> Go to https://www.macports.org/ to see it.
> Remember I'm not a native speaker, so if there's anything you'd like to
> improve, https://svn.macports.org/repository/macports/trunk/www is the
> URL for your SVN client.

Looks good. Only thing is the somewhat weasel-worded apology (a pet
peeve of mine):

"We would like to apologize for any inconvenience this may cause."

If there is to be an apology of any sort, a more direct expression of
the sentiment might be:

"We apologize for the inconvenience this presents."

Arto Bendiken | @bendiken | http://ar.to

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